Essay '' Argumentative Writing'' By: Shendy Elisabet S

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 Name: Shendy Elisabet Simbolon

 Nim: 1988203032

 Class: 4.2

 Subject: Argumentative Writing

 Lecturer : Dr.Herlinawati,M.Ed


                                                                 Mental Health

Health is often perceived from a physical point of view.  Though healthy also means mental health.  mental health problems are still considered less important than physical health.  WHO said that young people, aka the millennial generation, are currently more vulnerable to mental disorders.  Moreover, youth is a time where many changes and adjustments occur both psychologically, emotionally, especially in financial matters.  For example, efforts to graduate from college, find work.

While technology also contributes to the mental health of young people.  One of them is the use of social media.  Social media seems to create an ideal lifestyle that is not as beautiful as reality.  This is what creates pressure and a burden on the mind of the younger generation.

 Because the symptoms are not like physical ailments, it is often too late to realize.  Even though in Indonesia, the number of sufferers is quite large.  Half of mental illness started in adolescence, that is, at the age of 14.  According to WHO, many cases are not handled so that suicide due to depression is the leading cause of death among young people aged 15-29 years. 

Based on data from the Indonesian Ministry of Health, urban communities are more prone to depression, bipolar disorder, etc.  The increasing number of mental patients in Indonesia and around the world is due to the rapid growth of human life, as well as the increasing burden of life, especially experienced by urban communities.

  However, when compared to other countries, Indonesia should be proud.  This is because the level of stress in Indonesian society is not as high as other countries.  This fact is based on the 2018 360 ° Welfare Score Survey conducted by Cigna.  in Indonesia, 75% of respondents said they felt stressed “only”. Financial and work problems are the main causes of stress.  Therefore, mental health matters must be equated with physical health so that there is no imbalance between the two.


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